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Its the moment you've all been waiting for. Day and Night checking to see if I, LilyJump13 had made this wonderful story you all love... Part 3 of Edward Elric X Reader... Will you meet him again? Wait and see...
Last Time~~ 
Riza's P.O.V. ~~ 

I walked towards the Elric brothers train. I saw them get off and walk towards me. "Hello," I saluted. Ed saluted, "So why did Colonel Bastard bring us back?" I smiled, "You'll see, at least your on time." I walked back towards the car i got to escort them. "What are we on time for?" Al asked, but i stayed quiet while Ed got frustrated thinking why Colonel wanted them.Everything is going as planned, lets just hope nothing will go wrong, I thought. 

Your P.O.V. 

You woke up by some one gently shaking you and chanting, "_____! _______!" It was Havoc, he was shaking you waking for some reason. He was the one you told you to go and rest. "What do you want, Havoc?" Havoc stared at you and then the grandfather clock, "Lets go!" he grabbed a hold of your hand and dragged you back to Roy's office, the place Havoc didn't want you to be until now. 

Havoc's P.O.V. ~~~ 

I stood, guarding ______'s room. I kept looking at my watch, waiting for Roy's signal. What was taking him so long? I checked my watch once again, 8:59, one more minute. I grabbed the walkie talkie and spoke into it, "Colonel, is the shrimp in the bucket?" I waited for his answer until i heard my walkie talkie screech, "The shrimp is in the bucket. I repeat; the shrimp is in the bucket!" 

"Okay, over!" I ran into ______'s dorm.

Your P.O.V.~~~ 

You were being drag to Roy's office. You didn't expect to be in front of a dark pitch black room. "Havoc whats-" You were interrupted by an unexpected scream, "SURPRISE!!~" You saw everyone standing there popping graffiti every where. "W-Whats going on?" 

"We wanted to surprise you and make you smile!" Fuery said smiling from ear to ear. You at the midst of crying tears of joy. You have great friends who would do anything for you- that includes Roy. You smiled brightly and exclaimed, "Let me hug you guys!~~" You ran up to them and group hugged. There was something you didn't know, something was in the closet. Listening in to your conversation with everyone. 

Edward's P.O.V.~~~ 

I sat there in the pitch black closet, squished by Al. I don't know what the hell is going on. The moment we got to roy's office we were pushed into this closet! "Dammit!" I exclaimed kicking the closet. "Brother, be quiet." Al hushed me. I looked at him, "They pushed us in a CLOSET!! A DAMN CLOSET!!!" Al shook his helmet head and said to be quiet. Why are we in here anyways?! I put my ear against the closet door to hear ______'s voice. I missed her silky (hair color) hair, her angelic voice, and her beautiful- What the hell I am i saying?! I blushed a little and shook my head furiously. Anyways, I missed her and hated to leave her alone. I knew she was mad she couldn't come with me and Al. I sighed and pulled my ear away from the closet door. 

Roy's P.O.V.~~~ 
I looked as ______ smiled brightly. I coughed, getting everyones attention, "______ we have a little surprise for you." I walked in front of the white closet door and put my hand on the handle to open the door, "Surprise!!!!"  

A/N: MUHAHAH Cliffhanger!~~~~~ I did that cause i wanted a part 4... sorry if it was too short... 

I hope you enjoyed!~~ Sorry it was to short :iconotlplz: Yes it is me, sticky455789 i just changed my name...

I do not own FMA

You are owned by :iconfullmetalplz: :iconpervyelricplz:
Part 1: [link]

Part 2: [link]

Part 3: You are here~~

Part 4: Coming soon
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Jazellia Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2015
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Pokemonhugger15 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015
More more more more more more more more!!!!!
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MitsukoElric Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I need more of this!
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theotakugurl Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2015  Student General Artist
WHERE'S PART 4?! I WANNA READ MOOOOOORE!!! IT'S GETTING SO GOOD! Nuu 
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CitrusOtakuTea Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
how dare you make it short and not have part 4 rah rah rah jdfj;dsjfksjkj
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Princess-Of-Light-1 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ahhhhh!!!!! Where is part four?!?!?! I need part four!!!!!
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TrajikMajik1022 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wheres part four.
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FullmetalPain Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Student Artist
roy: we have a little surprise for you.
me: :iconicwhatyoudidthereplz:
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AngeltheforgottenRO Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lol I read ("the shrimps in the bascket! I repeat . the shrimps in basket !") and instantly imagin roy running around the room like he is on some top secret mishen and lolled  so hard I fell off my chair . not only that but also he called ed a shrimp two times in arow
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FullmetalPain Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2014  Student Artist
seems right!
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paigertlol Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
WHY DID YOU DO THAT TO ME :.(?!?
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emmalynncat Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
SURPRISE!!(agaiin)
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FullmetalPain Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Student Artist
pervyelric what??XD
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elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014
NUUUUUU!!!!! A CLIFFHANGER!!!!! :iconnooooplz:
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FullmetalAndCatLover Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol I almost died when I heard Ed was stuck in a closet!!! So priceless!!
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AskWhiteWolfViolet Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ok nvm found it he-heh
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AskWhiteWolfViolet Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
where is part 4??? it sais this was submited almost 2 years ago Q~Q
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WordsofWind Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
XD AHAHAHA OMG you called Edward a shrimp and little XD 
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DarkFallenAngelof Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014
Roy: "We have a little surprise for you!" *pulls open closet*
Edward: *falls out of closet* "Little surprise! Little!! 


Cant ant wait for the next part!
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CPCrimsonStrike Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
a little surprise

Ed: "WHAT DID YOU SAY ABOUT ME BEING A BOY SO SMALL YOU HAVE TO USE A MICROSCOPE TO SEE ME!" *continues ranting*
Me: xD lol. "Shut up Ed."
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callamoon14 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I NEED PART 444444444
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SnowWight208 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
Oh... never mind found it.
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SnowWight208 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
Plz hurry with part 4. >.<
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Demongirl1789 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
:iconmoarplz: :iconnaoplz:
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peapod1281 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Student Artist
Little surprise...
i see what you did there...
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MitsukoElric Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Can't wait for the next part! Awesomeness!
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DragonSkaterofFAB Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
little surprise.... :iconicwhatyoudidthereplz:
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CrystalMapleLeaf Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It looks like Mustang ships Al x Ed... XD -Shot
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songartist1124 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Student General Artist
super duper please with ice cream and cherries on top finish the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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DarkRoseStayla1 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why you no have part 4 up yet!!! :XD:
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bunnymundlover Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013

please please please make another one if its on here I cant find it

 

 

:iconpweaseplz:    :iconotlplz:

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LilyJump13 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's in my profile xD
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bunnymundlover Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
oh where that come from :iconletmehugyouplz:
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LilyJump13 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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bunnymundlover Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
:D
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bassebomfjer Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
you Miss are truly evil 
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chals099 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
MORE PLEASE!!!
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hetaliagirl47 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Please send me the Link to the next part
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Jojobean7 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
MOAR PLEASE! :heart:
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Animefangirl-Peggy65 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconiheartitplz:Please make more! :iconpweaseplz:
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Pokemon-Silver Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

Please Please CONTINUE IT I really really really hate cliffhangers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great story by the way! :love: :love: :love: I really LOVE IT! :adore: Smile 

SORRY T WAS RANDOM!!!!!!!!!!!

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crimrosegothslight Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcannotevenplz: lol I love this one its hilarious to me
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crimrosegothslight Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

:iconcannotevenplz: :iconotlplz: :iconwhyyyyyyyplz:

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makaalbarn7 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconrageguyplz: FUUUUUUUUUUU
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chibiluka360 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
moremoremoremoremoremoremoremore

take your time

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:iconchibiluka360:
chibiluka360 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
mmmmmmmmmmmoooooooooaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
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Shadowlover2 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
oh pwease update the cliffhanger bothers me so!
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Cryaotic8008135 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student Artist
Waaaah! Please update!!! Please please please!
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FairyFudge07 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WHAAAAAAAA! That's too big of a cliffhanger! :happybounce: 
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bananaboat123 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013
Please tell me when the next the next chapter is up! I can't wait!
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