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Oct . 3

You sat impatiently on the brown couch in Roy's office. Roy sat at his desk clicking the pen up and down, he was more impatient than you. You raised your eyebrow, looking at him. He kind of looked constipated with his eyebrow twitching; he looked likes he was going to explode with rage.

Soon enough he did... you flinched at the noise of Roy's hands slamming on the wooden desk, "Whats taking Full Metal so long?!" You looked at him with a plain expression and you shrugged as you rested your feet on the tea table in front of you. Full Metal; Edward Elric, was called by Roy about a predicament that happened not to long ago...

Not to long ago~~~****
Oct. 1

It was a board meeting with King Bradley and some other military men, including Roy and Ed. You were there too, standing on the left of Roy while Riza stood on the right. Like always, Ed was late. You always wondered what was in that boys mind. He always seemed so far away from you, like a transmitted wall was between both of you. You didn't understand what Ed and Al have gone through since your family or close friends have never died, but you don't complain, you had a great childhood life. You had great friends, great parents, and a great home.

You stood impatiently as King Bradley sighed, "Wheres Full Metal, Mustang?"

Roy straightened his back and put on a serious face, "Not sure, Sir!" Like exactly on cue, Ed ran into the room with Al following suit. Doesn't sound like a predicament? Well, while Ed ran in he tripped making Riza fall towards Roy, they landed in a uncomfortable position. Roy, red as a tomato. Riza, speechless and weak at that moment. You stood there, covering your mouth, and trying not to laugh. From the corner of your eye you saw Ed smile at you and stare at you intensively with his golden amber eyes which made you melt.

Present~~~~****

You sighed as you put your hands behind your head, "Chill Roy, he will be here soon."

"Thats not the point..." Roy responded with a stress face. "Then what is it?" You said sitting up, looking toward him with a curious look.

"Today... is the day," Roy put his hands under his chin and closed his eyes as if he was remembering something. You just looked at him dumfounded, 'Today? Oct. 3, right?' You thought for a moment, putting your finger on your chin, but were interrupted by a SLAM. "Sorry we're late, Colonel!" You heard the too familiar childish voice. You smiled brightly at the armor and the shorty next to him, "How's it going, Elric's?"

"Everything's going great, _________!" Al said sitting on the couch across from you, "How about you?"

"Well, life has been so far great," You sighed crossing your arms over your chest, "Dad got into an accident, again..." Ed looked up instantly when he heard you say dad. He seemed kind of, out of it today. "Why didn't you tell me, _______!" Roy exclaimed, "I would have let you go off and see your father!" (A/N: Roy seems out of character...) Roy and your father, (Dads name) were best friends since their Elementary, Middle school, High school, and College years. You were like Roy's niece.

"Roy calm down, he isn't dead so i'm not going." You closed your eyes, feeling uncomfortable with the stares you've been getting.

"How about i send Ed with you!" Roy smirked.

"What about Al?" You asked.

Al put his front of him and waved them like jazz hands, "Don't worry about me! I want to visit Winry anyways." You stood up and walked up to Al and nudged him playfully, with a smirk you sang, "Awww, I heard from Ed, things have been going smoothly with Winry!~" Speaking of Ed, he was really quiet the whole time he was there. You looked at Ed's direction, who was now staring out the window with a sad expression, not paying attention to the conversation you, Roy, and Al were having. You looked at him, worried. Was he sick? Is he mad at you? Find out in Part 2!~
I think i was lazy with this :iconotlplz: Anyways....
i dont own Ed~~ For some reason i love leaving my readers at the edge of their seats!!! Will Ed go with you to your hometown? Will Ed tell you whats bugging him? GAHH So confusing?!?!?

You are owned by :iconfullmetalplz:

Picture is not mine~~~~

Part 1: :reading:

Part 2: ~~IN PROGRESS~~ :writersblock:
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SomeoneFromGalifrey Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015  New Deviant  Writer
OMG I WANT MOAR
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AngllannaKurayami Featured By Owner Edited Jun 3, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Angel: When I read the title, I thought it was a song fic.
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theotakugurl Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Student General Artist
I. MUST. READ. MORE.
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Mycat528 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
U ARE EVERYWHERE! Y U EVERYWHERE???
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theotakugurl Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015  Student General Artist
... You're like, the fourth or fifth person to say that happy cry XD  
I just read a lot of fan fic.
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PinkSaphira Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  Student Artist
excited for the next!
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Lucijohn Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Awesomeness!
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AngeltheforgottenRO Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry I had to do this ;-;

Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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kittykatt765 Featured By Owner Edited Oct 19, 2014  Student Artist
la in love Love Tards Llama Emoji-23 (Shyness) [V1] Llama Emoji-02 (Blush) [V1] Heart Love Llama Emoji-21 (Speechless) [V1] Marluxia Faint BoF: Faint faint :faint: remake BlushyRitsu Tomochika Shibuya (Dies from tiredness) [V1] Kitty Cat 2  OMG I LOVE IT!

ALSO LOL Hoo Hoo  JAZZ HANDS
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HicHaddock Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Student Artist
October 3 is the day he and Al left and burned their home and ED engraved it into his state alchemist pocket watch and it said ;Don't Forget 3.Oct.11
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Crystalstarlove Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013
:iconfullmetalplz: aw cutest icon ever! and I love your story :D
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SegaRocker21 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Lol, al with jazz hands, priceless! :iconjazzhandsplz:
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KuranYuuki100 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
Omg is oct.3 the day his mother died!?
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Envylover565 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
The day they burned down the house
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KuranYuuki100 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Oh oh okay. I knew that xD
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kat1088 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Can you send me the link when part two is finished
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japanxcanadaforever Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oct. 3... Oct 3... why's it so important, I can't remember.... why?!
Awesome story! I can't wait for the next part!
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Littlemisspagan Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013
The third of October, if I remember correctly, is the day that they burned down the house.
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japanxcanadaforever Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh! Thank you very much! :)
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Littlemisspagan Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
No problem. :D
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japanxcanadaforever Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yay! :iconyayamericaplz:
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pokemon7777 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
hehe
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LessThan33 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
IT'S 3.OCT.10
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kitgrimreaper Featured By Owner May 30, 2013
when i read fanfiction highschool musical comes on
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LilyJump13 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What? XD
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Mycat528 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Cas: I am confused as well.
Me: You and me both, buddy...
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awesome1st Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
Fhgyhyhvhjjhjbycgbgncgchghvghfjcgbhcfhjhfgyf
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LilyJump13 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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SatinIris Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Student Artist
dang you DX i'm gonna die of suspense! great story, but why must i wait for updates TT^TT it will aid in my premature death. but don't rush, it's easier to make mistakes that way. can't wait for the next part, literally >x<
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LilyJump13 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD LOL Dont die!!!!!


^^ hehe thank you for reading!!
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SatinIris Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student Artist
i'll live longer with an update, and i read what i like and like what i read. if i have no interest in something i give up XD
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LilyJump13 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD lol I'll make sure you dont get bored of my story?
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SatinIris Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Student Artist
you've already trapped me with your story so you have no problem on that XD
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LilyJump13 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yay!!!
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cielxyuri Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
Can you link part 2 I can't find it xD
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LlamaRingleader Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why'd my iPod post it that many times
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LilyJump13 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It didnt xD
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LlamaRingleader Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It looked like it posted it three times
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LilyJump13 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Really?
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LlamaRingleader Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really
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LlamaRingleader Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol my dads name is Roy it's ironic. Lol it's really funny. Roy and Roy have been best friends for years lmao
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LilyJump13 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD i knew someone would say that
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LlamaRingleader Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's actually my dads bday today
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LilyJump13 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
OHHH Happy Birthday for your daddy!
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LlamaRingleader Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. I'm a bit late to reply tho
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LilyJump13 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
narrr it's okay :3
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LlamaRingleader Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hah k
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LilyJump13 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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BlueWolfhanyou Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
AWSOMENESS! keep going plz! love this story! your an awsome writer!
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